All Comments on 'His Slut Wife'

just a pig who writes.

Their is no love or respect here, just trash. Why would stright white guys want to read this shit, at least put it in interracial. Awful

I wouldn't call her a slut because that would just give sluts a bad name. This was just bad, please don't ever write again.

I suppose that some of these sophomoric juveniles write just so they can describe having sex. This is way overdone, especially in the absence of some story context. Hell, even 14 year-olds can do that much. They must write this stuff in order to get themselves off. It would be much better if they just masturbated in private.

What the hell is this? Why did you even think about writing such garbage?

Terminally stupid

What a bunch of pathetic losers. Only one left his name, the rest hid behind the anon button. Losers all.

Keep up the good work Jen...loved the story.

This is to the little fagot that emailed me...anonymously...figures.

Dude, this is a S T O R Y, F I C T I O N. I realize that and read it that way. I don't take it personal, I don't think my wife is doing these thing, I don't think your wife is doing these things, although with a pea brain like yours I wouldn't be surprised if she did.

So I think from now on I will, as all the other great authors here should do, is not accept anonymous feedback

Calling your self a "great author" was pretty funny.

she a he..hahahahahaha. wife jen indeed

a bit boring as there was not much of a story but hell if it's that what you like write it.

to Zeb_Carter: who are you ? Zeb_Carter? well that tells us all a lot. I'd say as much as anonymous or don't you think. not anonymous would be if you would write down name , adress, phone number..... then you would be not anonymous for some readers, cause maybe someone would live close enough to know you. other than that (eventhough I like some of your stories) you just make the impression of a frustrated writer. where does that come from ? maybe it has something to do with your writing or with the attitude of the character you design ?

Your main character went from one fuck to another, but the descriptions of her escapades left me wanting. There were no characters one could relate to. Let's put it this way, could have been a lot better. Kind of blah reading, almost mechanical. Of course others may see it differently, but that's my opinion. Good luck on your next effort. ML

"faggot has two "g's". Don't trust spellcheck, learn to use a dictionary. It's wicked easy, if you practice.

insanely boring . . and LOL I agree with the comment about there is no way "slutwifeJen" is a woman, this story was not written by an actual woman

You have everyone excited, Jen. Good job, but have to admit I got almost as much pleasure from the comments. Keep writing and they will all keep reading. LOL

I would love to read more. Nothing like a hot girl that likes to fuck.