by Her11
OMG! I’ve been checking every day for the next chapter and the only disappointment today is that there isn’t enough! I’m loving the growing relationships between Ben and the people in his life he thinks don’t see him. Hurry up with the next chapter!
I absolutely loved it and it was worth the wait. I'm excited to see what happens next and can't wait for the next chapter.
Awww yay! I loved seeing a new chapter added 😄.
I'm looking forward to seeing Eric's reaction & how everything else plays out ❤
Please continue this story is good. Hope you have a good weekend.
OMG What a place to stop! 😫 I can’t wait to read the next chapter! 😁
Ben!! What a sweetheart he is, I just want him to be happy! And Eric —- omg I want to see them together! I check for updates every day, don’t keep us waiting. What will Eric say when he sees Ben’s new look? Is he going to like it or is he going to think Ben isn’t being himself? I need to know! Please, I’m in quarantine and reading is like my only entertainment and this story is my favorite. I picture the characters so clearly it’s like I know them.
Please leave your new game alone and keep writing! I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
This would be my dream encounter haha I'm like the sub a bit which makes the whole story hotter
Please don’t keep us waiting as long for the next chapter. This was great as usual I can’t wait to read what happens next, preferably with no cliffhangers before they meet again
Okay forgive how salty I sounded in my last comment I just desperately want to read what happens next x
Please keep going! This story is soooo good!! Every night after work I check if the next chapter is out yet!!! Please don’t make us wait!!
I’ve been coming back daily to check if the next chapter was out and I’m glad it’s finally here!
Write faster, write more....just write, damn it! This is one of the best series I’ve read and I need more! Please?
Ok. We need more! The characters are rich, the feelings are real, and the build up is tantalizing!!! C'mon--please don't make us wait too long!!!!
The anticipation for the next chapter is going to kill me. We need it! ;)
Not sure why you worry about comments. They will always be positive. Keep up the great writing and get busy on the next chapter. Impatiently waiting...
This story is my fav on the site. literally the only time i commented, please update :((((
Oh this is fabulous!! I love this story and check back more often than I should to see if there is a new chapter. I can’t wait to see how Eric reacts!!!!
I promise that you did not sound salty, I love constructive feedback. My writing can always improve. I know everyone wants longer, which is sometimes challenging to me because the other sites I post on like shorter and more often so I’m trying to find a happy medium that works for everyone. But more is on the way. Can’t wait to see everyones reaction to Eric’s response to Ben’s new look ;)
Omg! So so so good! Can't wait for the next chapter. Love the hot and cold thing.
Ahhhhh!!!! Noooo, these tidbits are excruciating. It's just so good! *drool*
It does seem out of character for Ben to be comfortable dressing overtly sexy. I'm looking forward to his responses to being looked at in the club and how his sass kicks in. Hoping to see more of Eric's caring respect vs predatory urges interplay when Ben bowls him over. Squeeee! Hurry! <3
I am new to your stories but I fine that just as all who have known of you for years I want and need more. The story for me tells not only of a world that I have not been in but also of a old fashion way of 2people coming together not just for sex but something much deeper. One is easier to come by than the other so I wish to see what the out come be for Ben.
I think Eric isnt going to like Ben showing up trying to act sexy as I think he just wants a somewhat normally dressed guy so Ben showing all sexy-like is gonna frustrate Eric. Just a theory
Thank you for giving us another amazing chapter despite the temptations. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Author person I say this with love: Step away from Final Fantasy XV and update the damn story! More more more!
please i need more more more more more more more more more more more and a little more...... like 40 or 50 chapters please
Great story so far. Can't wait for the next part
I'm absolutely living for every chapter and can't wait till you upload the next
Please write more! This story and the mafia story are just screaming for you to finish them!
I absolutely love this story, and I cannot wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
You asked for comments which you’ve got, can you deliver on the content? Or do you plan on leaving us hanging on another fantastic story when it’s getting juicy? 😩
Im not sure if u are still reading comment s on this story but it was marvelous! Are you interested in writing feminization stories? That would be great.
I am enjoying every chapter. And for me as a submissive, your DEMAND for Comments is HOT! You have my attention. And your story has my attention too. I can't get enough. Thank you.
Harley’s nice but the way she is pushy towards Ben, I can’t see what has them being friends this long and why it’s taken til now for Ben to open up to her. Seems like her forcefulness would’ve had him doing that a long time ago.
Androgynous sex kitten attack! A blabbering seduced Dom is a very hot thing to witness.
I love the clothing imagery it helps set the scene for the upcoming jawdrop.