by Bottom_side_up
I enjoyed the contrast between the two boys. Also enjoyed that Jack could be dominant without being a rough, asshole.
Laney is a fantasy girl, but you definitely have the group sex issue covered in spades. Very titillating stories.
Very sexy and crazy! The feelings of a girl during group sex are described very interestingly. Hope to see Laney's story continue this way.
Jack was nimble, Jack was quick Jack had Laney so very quick. Sorry about the lame ryeme, I'm trying to stay in the period.
Your a very fun writer
I like your stories but I may be a little anal. A shutter is on a window. I think you meant shudder. And he didn't tell an untruth (lied), he lay down.
Fabulous! A textbook of pleasure, ideas never previously read anywhere! Bravo! No problem with the few grammar, typing, etc., issues. Go girl - a surprise after surprise. About eight years of no intercourse after my wife’s younger soulmate-travel-etc-partner, and almost-next-husband in Norway who died due to a stroke while jogging through an forest trail, this story is a wonderful pick-me-up and gives me hope for the future!