All Comments on 'Hit and Run'

I know, I'm focusing on the wrong details, but she picked him up at the scene and took him home, hence no hit and run. Hit and screw, maybe....

She should have used the Taser on Derek--right in the balls.

Thoroughly enjoyed your story.

Thank you- and you're absolutely right. Hit and Screw would be a much better title:)

Good story!!!

I hope there's a chapter 2 and even a chapter 3.

It's a cliffhanger so far!!! So much can happen still with Derek and thug boy.

:-)

Story has great form. You're a natural writer.

Please write another story or two on this series! Would love to see round two with the young man and seeing how Derek would react to her new found strength of self worth. Maybe Dereck needed to put in hand cuff and be teach a lesson! Thank for taking your time to write this and share with us. Hope to see more from you soon!

Really well written.