All Comments on 'Hoff and Hols, a Romance Ch. 04'

A bittersweet and touching ending (if this is the end for these two). Still, in Oxford and York they have two of the country's nicest cities to visit one another. At first I thought the duo (or more like AK) had corrupted Fergie so it was good to declare them innocent, Fergie already having an undisclosed track record. Now I'm already agog to see what you will next pull out of your mental magician's hat.

Whether we say good bye or au revoir or auf wiedersehen or soyonara - we must let go of something to make room for something new.

The bittersweet moment is described so beautifully, the passage from youth to adulthood, the salty tears sweetened by the promise of the future.

Even if the story is a fantasy, the emotions are real. They resonate with anybody who ever experienced love, whether it is love for a person or love for life.

Darling Pixie, you capture the essence of such emotions. You evoke and create memories by writing a beautiful story. This way fleeting moments can last forever.

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Darling Amadeus, I am glad you feel I have caught something of the emotions which such times can create - endings, beginnings, rites de passage, all have bitter-sweet connotations, which is what I was trying to capture xxxxx

Thank you, darling Maonaigh, and these two will go on, thanks in part to the enthusiasm of the readers - so thank you xxxxx

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The story really came together in this final? chapter. The romance was served up beautifully. Even the erotically taboo scene with Fergie was quite touching in its own way. This chapter is my new personal favorite out of all of PixieHoff's many fine offerings. I really hope Hoff and Hols reunite in the not too distant future. Bravo PixieHoff ! ! ! ! !

Simply impossible to characterize this romantic tale in a few words, and that dilemma is a testament to your creativity and writing wizardry. Both attributes seen to flow/come so easily for you. Yes, this last chapter was outrageously funny, poignant, sensual, erotic, insightful — there I go trying to capture something wonderfully memorable in a few words. That is the key — a memorable romance there to be enjoyed again and again, though must say that I am glad we have not heard the last of Hoff and Hols together. You clearly enjoy sharing your imagination with others. Thanks.

Thank you so much, Anonymous. I am so glad you have enjoyed this as much as you have. The story will continue xxxx

Thank you, Migbird. Such positive responses encourage me to continue xxxxx

Beautiful conclusion

The punishment by Fergies was all very irregular but it worked magnificently in this closing chapter. The goodbyes (& I believe that is what they were, regardless of the intentions to meet up again) was done with great love and sensitivity, and the intense feeling between H&H came through in your writing.

Fabulous xx

Such is the brilliance of your writing, to be able to follow up on the hilariously funny endin of chapter three with this 5 star offering. Left with no real last day option poor Fergie, happily of the sapphic persuasion, opted to go along with the sexy alternative of a bare bottomed caning. Hoff and Hols weren't the only wet ones. What a delight that they enjoyed an authority sanctioned last night 69! I found the poignant conclusion emotionally and congratulate you yet again on your inspired writing. xxxx

I so identify with this story especially as having the same AK initials :-) I am in awe of your skills Pixie, how you make me squirm and am just sad the Hoff and Hols have parted. I am hoping, for not for long.

Thank you so much Wiz. I was very tempted to stop here, but even more tempted to go on - let's hope it wasn't the wrong decision xxxx

My darling Evie, thank you so much for all your love and the inspiration you give me xxxxx

Thank you so much Anne - and as you will seem they will soon be reunited xxxxxx

...to a beautiful chapter in the life of our dear Hoff. I have a feeling, of course, that we have not seen the last of Hoffs & Hols together. And after that "punishment" scene with Fergie, I doubt it's the last time they see her as well. :)

Thank you, OneAuthor - I have decided to continue with the series - in part because of such wonderfully supportive comments like your own xxxx

I don't know why the text became so blurry toward the end. Perhaps my monitor is going bad. I will have to have it checked.

It is true, I fear life it little more than a series of partings. Try as we might, to hold what we love, it is all too soon gone. Every parent knows that feeling as their child a moment ago was in the bassinet and the next has their own child cooing for attention. You somehow reach into my heart and pull out things I had once forgotten. People who were distant memories and now I wish I could call. It is your gift my beloved daughter.

Thank you, darling MamaS - and yet, in the partings there are fresh meetings, and life continues xxxx

Leaving a soul is the hardest, not knowing this as we just have to live forward to getting the knowledge from the past ...... And then the thunderstruck after a little while , 20 - 30 years, this was the love of my life ....... So i hope hoof and hols are getting the information earlier

Lovely written as always 💝💝💝💝💝

Thank you Franziska xxx

Hof & Hols forever. I knew the separation would come but still shed a tear. Their romance and love must certainly continue but separated the heart will grow fonder.

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It will, Aoife, and love will find its own way xxxxxx