All Comments on 'Hoff and Hols, a Romance Ch. 12'

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MaonaighMaonaighover 2 years ago
In one way...

...it's sad that the young Sheila and Hector didn't marry and have a happy life together. On the other hand, had they done so it's unlikely we'd have had the Pixie we all know and love. Fate has a way of balancing the scales. Let's hope those same scales come down heavily in Pixie's favour against her appalling mother who no doubt has concealed the trust's existence hoping to gain some benefit for herself. Find a good solicitor, Pixie, and let right triumph! (I did like Footy's not-so-subtle blackmail of the taxi company.) Another hatful of pleasure in this chapter.

Qwer12Qwer12over 2 years ago
So so Love Your Storytelling Abilities

Pixiehoff you provide your fans some of the most entertaining and intense storylines that make us all understand the emotions of your characters. So deep but fun to read. Always Great turns and twists. As many have said before, including myself, we so Love the Great characters and storytelling which we have come to enjoy in all your stories. Another Great work!!! Cheers

amadeuseroticamadeuseroticover 2 years ago

A kaleidoscope of emotions

I wish Sheila could have stayed after delivering the message that Pixie is now a wealthy woman (a little bit like Sansa in Evie's story). A lover of her late father, she certainly had stories to share.

Then the child birth - it's good to be sometimes reminded of the fundamental purpose and consequence of sex.

Adult breast feeding - I understand the conflict if there is not enough for the baby - but when it is there in abundance, why not share?

At least it leads to some hot breast play between Emma and Pixie.

Three cheers for Footie the matchmaker! I feel inspired to write this:

There once was a man named Keith

A tough guy with a soft heart beneath

When he fancied AK

She wouldn't say nay

A perfect match, I believe

MigbirdMigbirdover 2 years ago

Delightful subtitle in today’s listing of Hof and Hols A Romance Ch 12 — perfect sign/theme for this tale. The storyline continues to be captivating, revealing and so much fun for us, your readers. Loved the birthing experience including the one liner that Pixie’s orientation hardly precludes same.

PixiehoffPixiehoffover 2 years agoAuthor

thank you so much, darling Maonaigh - and more to come soon xxxxx

PixiehoffPixiehoffover 2 years agoAuthor

Qwer12, thank you SO much. I am always enormously grateful for such great feedback - it means a lot xxxxx

PixiehoffPixiehoffover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you, darling Amadeus. We are not finished with Sheila or with the legacy. The tale is about to take a darker turn xxxxx

PixiehoffPixiehoffover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you, Migbird, I am glad you liked it - I do love a pun xxxxx

OneAuthorOneAuthorover 2 years ago
Love is all around

I am so glad to find out that the relationship between Sheila and Pixie's father was one that Pixie wasn't upset about. Of course, the knowledge of the trust fund puts Pixie once again in a potential conflict with her mother. I do hope she can work that out. And speaking of things working out, the birth of Izzy was a joyous occasion (and helped along by Footy's handling of the cab company)... and now AK has found another wonderful man (once again, helped along by Footy the Fantastic Force). Oh, and I absolutely loved the breast-play scene between Pixie and Emma. :)

PixiehoffPixiehoffover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you, darling OneAuthor - I am so glad that you are sharing in the joy xxxxx

SerradaCSerradaCover 2 years ago

Sweet as usual, some people have that gift and clearly Footy does. It is nice that Keith was so accepting, it is often easier with a baby, but no instant family is ever easy. You do well in showing that evolution. I was initially surprised at Hector but in the end, he was abandoned and honestly there was no sin there that I could see, even Christ said abandonment was grounds, it is nice he had some comfort and love in the end. At least he did not face his end alone, although he should have told Pixie but we are all weak and there is never enough time.

FYI ... 49 1/2 hours of labor, drugs are a gift from God and I used ever word I know and borrowed several.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

Yes this community is a lovely bunch of girls and so Lady F, ok seams just not involved intensely but never pushed aside, great ...... For shure its a nice relaxed lifestyle in the house ...... But meet and greet and marriage? That's lightspeed or!? ..... Hopefully this runs well for AK

PixiehoffPixiehoffover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you Franziska, not least for your appreciative comments xxxx

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