All Comments on 'Holidays with the Family'

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DunkirkDunkirkover 5 years ago
Fuck

The cousins need to have an orgy. All could suck, eat cunt and then fuck through the entire holiday. Hopefully when the holidays end the pussys would be sporting a baby bump

larry74403larry74403over 5 years ago
A fantastic start. Four stars

I can’t wait to see where you take this.

But please, let’s skip the pregnancy nonsense.

ready52ready52over 5 years ago
Great Start

Great start, looking forward to more. You have a lot of characters so try to avoid getting buried by them like some authors do.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
book

There are books to help you learn to write in English...two stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good start

Enjoyed reading it but i don't quite understand where you're going to take this story i see a bit of romance factor for beth and aryan but is it going to the family fun way? Well however it goes i am waiting anxiously for the part.2

Rapier875Rapier875almost 2 years ago

Give me strength - yet another unfinished story.

AAAAaaaarrrrrggggghhhhh !

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