All Comments on 'Holly and National Nude Day'

I Believe She Assisted Quite Well! The Photographers Had To Want To Be Part Of The Almost Still LifE! Very Interesting Story!

Hey spankforfun. I'm glad you liked Holly. She's a fun girl. I would love to be involved with something like this in real life.

With your user name have you ever read Paddleteacher? He writes interesting stuff here.

Thanks for the comment.

I loved the story & really enjoyed your writing style.

Hi Jetosh - thank you for your very kind words about my work and writing style. I appreciate them. Erotic writing is a lot of fun, I must admit.

Thanks for enjoying Holly so much!

Nicely done!

This is truly expertly written !! I enjoyed the development of the character of Holly. She has a new appreciable for National Nude Day. I also see her, the male model and Amanda getting better acquainted !!

This is truly expertly written !! I enjoyed the development of the character of Holly. She has a new appreciable for National Nude Day. I also see her, the male model and Amanda getting better acquainted !!

I gave it a 5, and loved the story, but, on page 1 there was, "Rick couldn't administrate himself out of a paper bag." An administrator administers. he doesn't 'administrate.'

I remember you wrote a couple of sequels to this story. Are you going to repost those too? I always found Holly an interesting character.

Thank you. I appreciate it!

Happy reading

Hi SweetKing126:

I'm so glad you like Holly. She is definitely a fun girl. You are right she does get better acquainted with some of the other characters.

Thanks for your very kind comments.

Wow, you are correct. Wish I had caught that the first time or even the second time I posted this.

I appreciate your tolerance even though I did goof!

Thanks for pointing that out.

Thanks for enjoying.

Hey PrevertOne:

Very good memory - thanks for remembering!

I'm so glad you liked Holly.

Yes, I wrote two sequels to this, and yes, I am posting them again as well as writing at least two more stories.

I had the idea of turning the Gallery into an Erotic Arts Gallery and featuring works as described in other writers stories giving them a shout out and chance for readers to find their stories. Annanova and PeterTowers both agreed to play with this. Anna was even nice enough to have Holly appear via phone in one of her stories as a set up. I really need to write those stories. I owe both of them.

Thanks again and happy reading.

Ok, maybe this is the one I want to win the contest. . . oh yeah! Please, please keep writing! You have the BEST imagination!!

Thanks again JJ. Best imagination huh? I don't know about that but thanks!

I have only just gotten around to reading this story and I thoroughly loved it. There are many possibilities of exploring with Holly taking on other roles as well. Would love to read another of her adventures ;)