All Comments on 'Holly’s Sales Training Ch. 01'

Goodbye Jessica, Hello Holly...fun times ahead.

i thought reading Mark Twain was a pita. But omg, this is a challenge fosur.

That was painful to read

Have to Agree, that was a pain to read.

Those abbreviations were difficult to read. You explain them once, but when they repeat they are just a jumble of letters.

I like the premise of pride, but it felt like they were already bimbos, rather than respectable women worn down into submission.

Thumbs up from me! I like the style and don't find it distracting.

The storyline is just great!!!

Can't wait for new chapters.

I like how things are developping...how Tia don't want to be branded as "Bimbo Blondie"...but acts like one ! I'm looking forward to Holly adventures !!

Too many abbreviations!!! Could not follow

the constant use of senseless jargon seriously distracts from the story line as a result I can only offer 1 star