All Comments on 'HoloLife Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The idea of the virtual trapping is amazing would love to see the guys have their way with their real bodies while stuck in the virtual world

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yes ! Please write more!

holeinjolaholeinjolaover 2 years ago

Great premise. Would love to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love the premise, and it's a fantastic first part. Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please describe the Korean girl in more detail in part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You need to get chapter 2 up ASAP! Your stories are awesome and so life-like!

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