All Comments on 'Holy Father Pt. 01'

by thickbutterfly

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Oh wow , so erotic ,can’t wait for the next instalment

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You gotta lend me a hand here. This feels like mind control shit, but we don't ever get any confirmation. The main character becomes mindless halfway through the first page. This has to be supernatural, right? When we meet the priest, the dialogue is just unnecessarily repetitive. I get that you're trying to make him sound wise and eloquent, but it's very boring. I'm guessing he's either a cult leader or some kind of magical creature, and if not, he's very weird human being. I am interested to know if this is going to be some kind of mystery.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

So very erotic , I came reading this

NicebiguyNicebiguy5 months ago

Stupid bullshit. I want the time back I wasted reading this crap.

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