All Comments on 'Holy Order of Revisionist Saints Ch. 03'

Very glad you have extended the story. Looking forward to where you take Will’s journey

The story continues to be thought provoking and took another unexpected turn. Chapter 1 seemed like 4 people unshackling from a previous controlling set of behaviors. Chapter 2 took things drastically to a scene out of a movie attempting to liberate endangered people from a hostile nation. Chapter 3 began to delving into fantasy with the inclusion of mystical powers and physical sperm having far reaching mental effects. While the story has taken me for a loop, there's always part truth to the tale. We'll see what next chapter has and thanks for sharing this with us.