All Comments on 'Home Ch. 04'

LOLL if only those churches really exist.

Oooh I would've slapped her and slammed the door

I'm all for a down to earth church. Jane basically handed the girl a free sex pass lol I damn thought she was going to pull out condoms too funny

"Hello," she said in a stern voice. "My name is Victoria Cavanaugh, and I believe you are fucking my sister."

What an introduction!

Poisonous, malignant people seem to know when someone is happy. It is so very gross their incredible sense of timing.

I look forward to seeing how Peyton rids herself of this cancer.

Are there people out there as ridiculous and over-the-top evil as this stepsister character?! She's crazy!

I need to know what happens next. Please

Peyton You better fuck your sister up how dare she go up to your man and act like that. She cut you off when your father died and prevented you from finding a job and have access to the money your father left you. Don't make her spoil your happiness

this victoria bitch has a lot of nerve to just show up on someone's doorstep like she about to regulate things! Peyton better knock this broad out eventually! S/N: 5 Stars!!!!

I love this story and I can't wait for the next installment. Nate and Peyton finally do the do and Vicki shows up. OMG!

On behalf of those who are rooting for nate and payton.....

Get a life, shut up and find your own.....

Wonderful story!

I would just pimp slap that ho and throw her out like the trash that she is; same goes for Addison the next time she came sniffing round my man and acting a fool (well, after I got a new job and an excellent reference LMAO I might be crazy but I ain't stupid).

Great chapter, Nate/Peyton are adorable and so HOT together, can't wait to see where you take them next XD

in my opinion only, peyton delivers a wickedright hook and nate closes the door, end of problem

can Peyton give her sister a slap, rude I say. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Loving this story so far and love the connection and chemistry Peyton and Nate are making and letting grow. But her sister...DRAMA I can't wait to see where that bump in the road is headed

Great writing can't wait for the next chp

Five.

I loved this chapter. I love the whole story line actually. I feel like it is going to go toward Peyton getting pregnant (hint, hint) and the things that will happen after that. Nate's insecurities will really come to the surface. You are doing an excellent job so keep up the good work.

great sexy chapter! keep it up