All Comments on 'Home Ch. 05'

You're doing a great job keep up the good work. Your story is refreshing.

Everyday I hunt for your updates to your story because it so soulful and spiritual.

As the previous person stated your story is refreshing with hidden meaning.

Please update soon. Sincerely, one of your biggest fans

now can Peyton whoop Addison's ass like she did her sister, and then whoop her sister a second tome. Loving this

Five.

*****

This story gets better with each update love it. And can I say I didn't know Peyton had it in her to go hood on her step sister...lol now all she needs to do is slap the teeth out of Addison! Love these two and love the chemistry and bonding with the core characters keep up the good work

So happy to have this update it was excellent and I'm so happy that Peyton gave her so call stepsister the beat down too and that she help Nate and his mom get back on track with each other and oh boy now here comes some more drama from the crazy one looking forward to see how that turns out please update again real soon thanks!!

I knew that bitch would find out soon enough. Lawd, can't wait to see the steam puff out of her nostrils next chapter, don't keep us waiting too long, please! This was an excellent update btw... Nate ♥ Peyton

-Mel

let nate and payton go off on her,

get on board :) Any weapons are not necessary :)

Loooove it seems to be the comment I leave for all my favs...but it fits so well....keep up the good work and I;m looking for to the next chapter! Im down for the Addison and Victoria ass whoopin!

Good story! I hope you throw in a double ass whoopin' on Victoria and Addison. For giggles, I wouldn't mind seeing Victoria end up having to kiss Peyton's ass on a humble. Hope Vic loses the money and Addison loses her mind. Whatever you choose to happen...I hope we get the HEA. Looking forward to your next installment!

I have enjoyed reading this series so far. I think it is just wonderful. I hope you hurry and finish the rest so that I can continue reading.

Loves company, that is why her sister plan will backfire and Addison will reap all of the seeds of manipulation, discord and hatred that she has sown in life, as will her sister.

They will marry and be happy with a house full of children :>)

I'm really enjoying your story thank you

but I have a few questions. 1)Did Peyton make the transition from living at the church to living with Nate? That's not clear. 2)Why does Peyton continue to work for someone who seems to be in stalker mode when it comes to Nate? It seems she would have looked for another job soon after finding out what Addison's connection was to Nate. It just doesn't make sense that she wouldn't be looking for another job. 3) Why hasn't Nate changed the locks to his home so that Addison can't just come into his home? 4)Why the hell do people think they can just walk into someone else's home without permission to enter? Any person trying that with me would never make it in, would never be welcome in my home again, and would know to stay away from me and my home from that point on.

you have actually got me scared about the bad things that might take place. why did u stop writing? please end it. BTW it takes a lot of courage for a guy to say he is scared. so come on give the story a fitting ending.

When will folks get it? When you're done change the locks on ALL the doors!!! Truly a no brainer.

First off i would like to point out that i really enjoyed your beautiful story. What the

f*** was you thinking ending the chapter there you sadist,and where is the next chapter. I'm not violent,but I will hunt you down.

I KNEW this would happen, I just KNEW it. I have a feeling that Victoria & Addison are in cahoots.... I don't like this one bit, I especially don't like that you interrupted his proposal. BUT that's what's making this story oh- so good :) Continue please, we're ALL begging you.

WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!

HELLO!?

i really hope you continue, i would love to read what happens next

Sitting on PINS && NEEDLES....this sh*t hurts....where's the next chapter??

Wow bet she was not expecting to see that..don't you just hate that it's such a small world