All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 048'

Savage cliffhanger. Thank you for the chapter!

Awesome chapter and we understand the season causing a lack in writing I hope you get a recharge from spending time with your family and can come back to us and blast a few chapters back to back for us your devoted reader makia

...hella fast. Mike got fucked up. Beth got smacked around. The other Banshee was the queen? Huzzah! Lots of new fun!!!

See you in 2020, I hope you have a great set of holidays. And thank you for all the work you put into this story in the 2019's, it turned out so great..

Congratulations on a year of writing.

Advance Happy New Year to you

Crime laughed my way through Mike and Dana's coupling, only for a bit of wonder and sympathy to set in at the brief return of Dana's life and less brief return of some of her humanity. Great chapter!

You conclude your year in great style as I expected you would. This lead up to the retrieval mission of our Banshee has been truly epic, and filled with both wonderful sex and love expressed between a human and his extended family. The Caretaker was In, then he was Out of the faerie realm in the blink of an eye (time flows much different there). He set out on a diplomatic mission, so brought no weapons grade magic, no powerful allies to his cause, no potions of protection, and not even a change of clothes or more rugged footwear,.. yet he and Beth returned alive, bloodied and bowed, but not broken. Now we will get to find out how a former dragon (now a girl with a horn on her head, and Storm-Lightning in her eyes) to can be welcomed into Hadley's Home for Horny (hey!) Monsters, and maybe be of help to Mike's bringing Cecilia home too. And I expect that Tink will use her Goggles to get the lights back on fairly quickly. Okay Annabelle, if you can keep this level of fantastic writing going your book 4 will be your best yet! Thank you, and TTFN

I've felt such regret that Dana has been left languishing. I am very happy she was able to feel again after so long. I hope she continues to get better. I'm also anxious to hear more about Cecilia. Looks as if the Fan queen will be quite the handful. Happy Holidays to all. Cant wait to read the next installment.

With Dana's positive reaction to Mike's magic semen and her aversion to heterosexual coupling, how about if Mike dumps a load or two into Beth and then Dana retrieves it via her natural instincts. Cunnilingus with Beth. At this point, I'm fairly certain neither Mike or Beth would find it a great inconvenience.

I'm hoping this new woman who's has uncontrollable powers maybe the "cure" to Dana. Maybe sending that crazy level of energy into her might bring her back to life for good? Just a theory... And a hopeful one from a fan at that.

Since Mike had sex with Dana, as per other times with the other characters there is a bit of a soul swap. So now Dana has a bit of a soul in her - which could be why she can now have feelings and taste. So the question is - what did Mike receive in the exchange?

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that was so much fun but now we need to know who these two are I can not wate to read more ,I love it

So glad you've started monetizing your writing. It really is very good! Compelling characters, intriguing plot with lots of Cliff hangers. It's really sucked me in. Kudos, happy holidays, and looking forward to hearing from you again next year.

Thank ye, lassie, for yer entertainment. T'was a pleasure it was, it was.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

They where only gone for three minutes or maybe three and a half minutes at most. Now they get to deal with another guest and are no closer to our favorite banshee.

A great read, love the new dimensions, expertly written. Thank you

We have new parts of the house, we have to find out about the cat girl and this door, and now the Fae realm and another new girl. I really really liked the way you handled Mike and Dana having sex. The scene was unexpected but felt organic under the circumstances of Dana's injuries. Dana is a lesbian but needs Mike's "stuff" so it's always going to be weird and awkward between them. Thank you for respecting her sexuality and not taking the easy way that some writers would have and just made Dana attracted to Mike because **all women really like men** or **it's the magic** just to simplify things and justify the sex. And yes the magic was a factor but you still kept everything honest and didn't shy away from the awkwardness. As always looking forward to more.

The cliffhanger of cliffhangers.

I hate the cliffhanger but I can wait. I think you could do with a sub story with Dana and Lily I think it would be interesting..

New girl has something sticking out of her head? It's not a gender bended Oliver is it?

The cliff hanger stinks because now I have to wait until 2020.

Great work again the next installment is eagerly anticipated.

Have a great Holiday season.

Keep the story going always riveting please don't stop S5

WOW! I continue to be amazed by your inventiveness and high quality of writing. Since I started avidly reading everything you write, I've had to recalibrate my determination of star rating. You've set the bar for 5 stars much higher. Eroticism alone won't rate more than 3 or 4. For top tier 5 star ranking I need to see Annabelle-like material: a creative story line with believable characters that care about each other, and who make me care too. And well written too, with natural dialogue, different perspectives to convey inner thoughts and feelings, and just the right amount of description.... Humor is a welcome bonus when it fits, and I love how you do that. Well I'm starting to bore myself... so I'll conclude with one more WOW! And thanks for your fantastic work!

PS I've been reading mostly using the LIT app, which allows rating but unfortunately doesn't enable me to comment. Consider this representative of 48 comments on Hfhm plus 7 more for your fantastic Last Of Her Kind series!

Yet another great chapter. Please continue !!!

And another archive binge completed! Wonder how long before F5 breaks?

I enjoyed it too much, Dana mixed feelings were the best of the chapter to me! , and the end left me frustrated thinking on how long I will need be waiting to know what and how long it took whatever happened at the Faery realm.

Naia a bit on the side isn't it?

God, i love your story.

You and me both hope you will find more time to write in the new year ;)

And boy oh boy, do i miss Cecilia :(

I am so addicted to your writing, the story telling, the awesome sex, everything! Please don't stop, I need more, please please!

Missing Cecilia badly,

Also thanks for finishing icemans wrath.

That was an interesting start to the fae cycle, more please.

really enjoyed it so far please keep it going in 2020

I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.

Alright!

Way to cliffhang with a bang! Now that I’m all caught up, I can finally shut my focus off and have a drink haha.

As are so many others, I’ll be waiting on the edge of my seat for your next chapter. I think I might check out the Arachne story while I wait.

John C

Your writing is so fantastic, I'm always sad when I realise I'm up to date again! Hope the new year treats you well.

After not seeing one of your introductions (and endings), I thought something might be wrong. But the quality of the chapter didn't confirm that at all. Really some interessting stuff going on with Dana. Also, of course I can't wait to see how Mike handles the faerie queen. Seems it will be difficult to even get a chat.

The ending surprised me greatly. That's what I love about your stories, they always manage to keep things interessting while also taking their time to get the reader settled with the familiar.

Another great one! Thanks so much for sharing it with us all.

Hoo boy am I glad I havent caught up yet. I'm excited with the interaction of Mike and Dana though I definitely don't want it forced. Just because he's the main character doesn't mean he HAS to fuck everything, no matter how exciting

Finally it happened!! Really hoping Mike and Dana get together and she joins the harem!!!!!

It got confusing at the end. What happened after this? There seems to be a clear gap between what happened in the end here and the beginning of the next chapter 49.

I'm I missing something? There's a situation here with a bright naked lady causing trouble before they go to the other world, destroying the portal. But in the next chapter, it says they're already inside the portal going further to the fairy realm? I didn't understand what went in between and where it takes place?

So if people are gay by choice, does that mean you’re straight by choice? Or just a douchebag by choice?

You have not returned Cecilia to her previous condition or brought Dana back to humanity.

Uhm... no offense but, fucking DUH

I just love some of your final lines, but this one is one of the best for sure... "She's a real peach, ain't she?"

Bwahahaha!

WOW!

The story tags always make me laugh

I potty Sulyvahn, he will eat his own words and the Queen will rue the day she was so arrogant. Finn

Dana would suffer a lot less if she just came to terms with being bisexual homoromantic Oo people being so obsessed with putting labels on everything has never led to anything good, although her insistence may be founded in having to fight for her identity in the first place.

If it wasn't for the scene where Dana was 'readjusted' i would've given 10 stars, so it'll only be 5 this time.

Wicked developments,

Doubly appreciated for giving them appropriate gravitas.

Looking forward to revisiting adventures in the fae...

Madness, no idea what's going on buy it's a great read.

I didn't like Dana's sexuality being in conflict with the needs of her magical nature. It just doesn't seem fair that everyone gets happy endings, but for Dana to have her happy ending she needs to compromise. Just as the author writes, it is a betrayal of herself and those women she has loved.

WriterAnnabelle seems to understand how hard this is, and writes very well the internal struggle Dana goes through. It just doesn't seem fair to Dana. This is a comedy in the Greek vein, and so the reader expects characters end up happy and in love. My fear is this cannot really happen for Dana if she has to compromise herself so entirely.

I just hope the author is showing the threat and choices Dana has before her and not following a Harem trope of turning the lesbian into a bisexual to find happiness. Writterannabelle has made Dana too real for that to be okay in this story. You are not writing cheap kink material, but a story readers like me really love.

Thanks for giving us a chapter on Dana.

Now, what the HELL just happened???

Great chapter.

Previous commenters had say almost all I want to say but that I wan that door level of security all arround phisical and virtual. I'm sure next chapter would be a telltale of Beth and Mike trip to fairy queen realm.

Not the porch again!

5* thanks for sharing.

Dixon(UK)

And there goes the porch.. again....😔

Ahhhh. This is my second time through the story and I am still entertained. You forget so much of the details after the years go by. I will probably read it all again in a few years time. Love it.

Mesmerizing

A real peach, eh? So you say, but I'm thinking something closer to beach. And then there's poor selfless Mike, having to jerk off in Dana's mouth to save her life. Taking one for the team. Good man.

Peach? Actually a more apt description than you think. The homophone for peach in Turkish can be defined in American slang as a cross between an SOB and an a** hole. (As explained to me by a back-seater that I flew with while stationed in Spain. He was bilingual.)

Nothing better than a Good pervert writing a Great book!

Looking forward to more 👍

Thank You

I'm glad that Mike and Dana finally got together! It's going to be fun to watch how this unfolds.

Now just the wait for Beth....

That was an interesting story. I wonder if Dana is going to have sex with Mike again. Maybe it can bring her back to life permanently.