All Comments on 'Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 056'

Hey writer. I have read all your books so far (exCept the new one). Pretty good. One thing I would recommend you try to practice is your descriptive writing a bit more. If you think about the best books, mistborn, wheel of time, lotr, etc, one of the most common things is they write so vivid you can see the world take shape in your mind. And one of the most powerful techniques is using metaphors. . Saying it was a green dress that glittered, or saying the dress was a glittering emerald, reflecting the fire into a shimmering hue as she twisted and turned. (for a weak example) Which one paints a stronger image in your mind? Adjectives are good, but metaphors are better.

Other then that, great story premise, good character development , and some HILARIOUS one liners (important). you have made me laugh outright at least 3 times so far and that is a win in my books . Looking forward to the next 50 chapters.

I can't tell you how glad I am to see one of your stories pop into my feed. I check every day for my other favs, but I always feel a bit of giddy happiness when I see 'home for horny monster' or another story come up. You never disappoint, and this is no exception. I was wondering if Mike's powers were changing with the new sparkles, but with the last bit, that could lead to many unique and interesting twists, or maybe even unlocking memories from the deal.

I'm also looking forward to new interactions with Cerb, maybe bringing the demon pup to the living world if it's possible, or bonding time while he tries to find the way to the fae realm. Could be interesting dialog between Mike and his good girls, maybe learning something from her

But that's just the rambling from an excited reader who's looking forward to the next chapter in this wonderful story, I know you'll tell it well.

Till the next time,

Kaleb

It's gonna be a good day! Whenever Annabelle posts a story it's always a good day.

Thank you, thank you, thank you.

G

This is the best series, and I eagerly await each new chapter.

This was a wonderful chapter. I love how well-rounded the characters are, how easy it is to become emotionally involved with them and want their success and happiness, and how damn hot the storytelling is. Bravo.

Lovely, absolutely lovely, just the right amount of story line, and erotic writing. i have been reading since chapter one and am always surprised and thrilled at the direction you are taking this story. I admire your ability to take me places in your own mind and let me feel like I am truly there! Thank you for your writing and keep up the most excellent work! As always 5*s, and again , lovely.

You’re good at what you do, Annabelle. Hopefully I’ll manage this level of detail and captivating story in my own works here.

Annabelle,

Your stories never fail to brighten up my days. Your writing is superb. I can't wait to celebrate H4HM hitting 100 chapters, as it surely must at this rate :)

The dance scene was great. I loved the fact she pulled in the reluctant dancer. just as the House members pulled her in. A good balance of sex stuff and story stuff. Keep the story line coming. It is worth the wait. 5 stars as usual.

You may captivate me for the rest of my life. I can’t wait to see if Mike can f*** his way out of this latest issue.

There are a LOT of characters but I do wish Tink and Nia would get more time with Mike, I kind of see them as being his primary partners.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, and your time with all of us out here in computer land. :-)

Like Kaleb_Bartlett, I always look forward to see one of your stories pop up in my authors feed. As I said in the past, I found you through the arachnid stories and put off reading this series until the beginning of this year. I have been hooked since. But I don’t check the feed as often as I used to because I have started writing myself. I do it for fun and to get some of the stories bouncing around my head out there. I have six new stories in the works and thought of some more recently.

Thank you for being a writer and making many readers of nonhuman fiction and monster girls. Look forward to what comes next. Cheerio

Like Kaleb_Bartlett, I always look forward to see one of your stories pop up in my authors feed. As I said in the past, I found you through the arachnid stories and put off reading this series until the beginning of this year. I have been hooked since. But I don’t check the feed as often as I used to because I have started writing myself. I do it for fun and to get some of the stories bouncing around my head out there. I have six new stories in the works and thought of some more recently.

Thank you for being a writer and making many readers of nonhuman fiction and monster girls. Look forward to what comes next. Cheerio

This chapter was quite enjoyable. The way things are going in it I sure did not expect things to go the way they did in this chapter. But that was a nice thing. Finally I will say the sex scene with Kisa was awesome. The way that Mike's power put on a light show was a cool new touch to it. I also couldn't help but laugh over what Kisa said about not having babies. I could just see both her's and Mike's faces in my mind. It left me laughing. 5 stars for this great chapter. From your fan R.S... P.S. Glad to know that you're doing just fine in these uncertain times.

Loving this story.

Please don't stop

Here I was patiently waiting for another scene with Zel... Guess it's not meant to be. : ( Still loving the story though!

Keep on keeping on!

One of my favorite storylines on Lit - the interwoven character development is outstanding. Perfect balance of fun, serious, and sex - can't wait to see where things lead!

You are so good at taking all these creatures from mythology and making them your own. Thanks

loved it ,like all the rest of your story please keep them comming

As usual another knock out. I don't know how you do what you do but keep it up. Lol

Kisa finally getting some was starting to get worried about her. Zel is pregnant?? Damn that was an awesome chapter.

Fantastic as always...

This series has to be the best on here by a long way.

Certainly the longest I've come across so far and has kept me completely enthralled since the very beginning.

Many thanks for sharing your amazing talent with us.

Really looking forward to reading more.

Yet another great chapter. Outstanding. Will wait as patiently as possible for the next one.

i literally finished 55 last night... good story, kinda got as scared as Mike felt when Zel said she was pregnant... Kisa is an interesting character and I can't wait to see if Mike finds Amymone's heartwood. Still waiting for the Cecilia thing as well... I wanna know how the Bitch Faerie queen is gonna fuck with them...

Great chapter as always, followed from the first it always has excitement and sexy scenes keep up the excellent writing

Stellar storytelling as usual. Bravo!

Oh please let Kisa get pregnant!! I have been wanting more little Mike's running around!

Please never stop this story i look forward to each chapter with such earnest

Another masterful story in Mikes ever expanding realm of sexy house mates. 5***** stars

Can’t wait for the next chapter! Keep them coming!

Amazing as usual! Please let Kisa get pregnant, as modern medicine can't do anything against Mike's magic. I think it would be a interesting plot point as well. Are we ever going to see the Arachne from last of her kind??

Amazing

No short tales from you on this series. Keep getting back on Literotica only because of this series.

Keep writing. Love and appreciate you for keeping this series alive.

Thank you, thank you, thank you

This is a wonderful story. Your character development and plot lines are superb. I can’t wait until the next installment

I hate having to wait. I read all that chapters so quickly when I discovered this that waiting for the next update is going to kill me

So when does Mime get to nail Yuki?

Yes! I want more Three+somes!

Shame about Zel finding someone else, but I’m glad she EXPLICITLY stated she wanted to be faithful to stallion. Cheating/NTR is GROSS.

Poor Tink, Mike needs to have some kids. I hope Kisa keeps them.

Ah, poor Kisa, dragged kicking and screaming into the fold. Her and Tink will likely continue with the teasing and put-downs, but likely also to become a deep and abiding shared love with Mike the man in the middle.

Hope things are going better for you. A delight as always. Thanks for sharing. 5* Slianté

Keep them coming. There may be shorter stories but there not as good. Lived the familiar reference and would kind of like to see her pregnant, as I think it could kind of add another dimension to kisa and mike's interactions.

Dear ma’am,

Wish I was a writer like u, so that I could use superlative adj to your stories.

Since I am not I simply say...amazing....wow and I love ur stories.

It’s become a habit, that I keep checking if u have posted another episode, just write the stories, don’t do anything else or even better let me do all your jobs and u simply keep writing these amazing stories.

Thank u for allowing me to read about the family members.hope u will keep writing them quickly now.

Love

Krish sandy

I love your writing and the world you've created. The characters are all really great, and I look forward to more chapters and maybe some connections form that haven't happened yet, like Mike and Yuki. However, this chapter has really made me sad with the change of Mike and Zel's relationship. Granted, a lot of couplings don't seem to happen very often anymore, and Zel has her duties to her tribe, but I felt my heart sink when she said their relationship would be changing. The pregnancy scare didn't bother me, but Zel finding someone else made me tear up.

Ive read everychapter since no.1, and plan to continue reading until you stop writing, ive become more interested in the character development than the sex honestly, but the sex scenes never hurt :) great job and keep it up!

I'll admit it makes me a bit uncomfortable how quickly Kisa went from dreading the notion of sex with Mike, to craving it. Estrus or no estrus, she didn't really make the conscious decision, did she?

I don't always comment, but I am a fan! You rock!!!!

Will Mike be involved with Dana and Quetzalli? Can Kisa use his magic now?Will Death become a good enough artist that his work is sold only to the highest bidder? Once again, some many questions from a new chapter. Thank you for writing this story. The wait is always worth it

Wow, this chapter really had a lot going on in it. Loved the short visit with Amymone and the second interaction between Mike and Cerberus.

It's more than a little sad Zel won't be involved with Mike anymore, I think their last interaction was an eternity ago. But that's what happens with that many great characters, I guess :/

And I don't know why, but the pregnancy idea really is interesting. Could be a great gift to the house, and I would really like Mike to interact with children. Although, Kisa is a strange choice in my opinion, even though yes, she's the only girl born human (except for Beth and Dana, who both would be much worse choices I think). But maybe Zel will fix everything ;)

Keep more coming

Loved it'now the long wait for the next chapter so hurry up I will waiting.P.S have a Blessed day.

Loved it! I always love it when you sneak one-liners in on your readers. Keep up the good work.

Annabelle, I have enjoyed your story from chapter one. The characters and how you make them interact. The imaginative storytelling is an absolute joy to read. Love all of your work. It is up there with Robert Jordon's Wheel of Time.

I am completely enjoying this story! I absolutely love the storyline, the characters, and the situations that they find themselves in. Keep up the Awesome work, I for one Love your stories.

Good News!!! After a few days of obsessive ready I have caught up on ALL 56 chapters of this EPIC tale. Bad News... I have caught up on all 56 chapters!?!

Side bit of good news I still have 'dead and horny' and 'Last of her kind' to read while I wait for the next chapter. I haven't commented much up to this point because I knew the next chapter was already written. You Said you have plans for four more books of the epic and a definite conclusion in mind. I look forward to every chapter of it. I have a few theories as to how this will go, But unless you ask the questions I'll keep them to myself. I do hope I'm right, but even if I'm not I think what ever you write will be the right choice. Thank You Annabelle! It's truly one of the best I've ever read. I truly think this could be published for sale. If you could make a deal with some Japanese Animators, You could be a millionaire!

Absolutely loved this chapter. It read seamlessly and smoothly. So easy to become completely submerged in the scenes and the world you've created . I've read this chapter twice now and think it's written so well. I really loved the dancing scenes with Kisa, I wouldnt have guessed they were difficult for you. Well done. One of your best chapters.

This is my favorite story ever I can't wait for more

I only started reading this 6 weeks ago. Now I am caught up again .I both love and hate waiting for the next installment.

I have to say, the main reason I stuck around when I first started reading this series was the quality behind the beings backstories and mythos, now I’m quite invested in the story and seeing where the next twist will take us. I tend to come back and check for updates every few weeks, so I’m in no rush to Harass you for new chapters, but always happy to see one I haven’t read yet.

I love this story, but with a month or more between each submission and a dozen or more key characters, I find myself losing track of who's who. In this most recent chapter you added dialogue that provided some extra clues for the reader, in this respect, and I'd like to encourage you to do more of that. It really helps connect the character's name to thier backstory. Thanks so much for providing the world such a fun story. I look forward to more of it!

Sex with a black cat in heat during a full moon definitely sounds like a spell. I can't help but wonder what the emotional fall out will be for Kisa. With all sex in the house her reaction of being kind of weirded out and a little turned on was understandable but it's not like she actually wanted to have sex with Mike. Mike won't be a jerk but it's still going to be some drama in the house and wtf does Kisa being a "familiar" mean for everything?

Hi Annabelle,

reading your story from France and loving it immensely!

please keep up the good work, in as you say uncertain times,

Tony

English, but also living in France , I loved this chapter . Hot dancing and hot fucking :)

I absolutely love this book!! I cannot wait for more of your literary genius. 😍

I have read every episode and have wanted to add my appreciative comments for awhile. Now that I have finally been able to register I am. This is serialization in the fine traditions of Charles Dickens and Zane Grey. It is a specialized form of the novel and you have mastered the craft. I wait impatiently for each installment—the true measure of a serial's success. The next chapter is here and I am going to read it now.

Ok... so I kind of have a thing for the cat girls but I wasnt really hoping they would get together. I didn't want it forced, if it happened cool, if not thats ok. But the way you weave it all into the story is just the absolute best. Its honestly really hard to find something that you can read and enjoy, and then have some sex in there too.

I'm a great fan of yours,just wanted to know I'm an Indian and your story is pretty famous here among us erotica readers

Loved it

You just keep coming up with something more interesting with every chapter. Thank you.

Your story just keeps getting better and better, and please don't put yourself down. I've been reading since the 60s and your story telling skills and imaginative story arcs are as good as any I have read.

I’ve been too busy for anything outside of work sadly. I love when I get the chance to read and falling behind on your stories are always a treat when I have free time since I can keep on reading new chapters.

Your talents are top notch and while shorter stories are fun, longer ones are that are written like yours are spectacular to read. I never ask for anything (kink wise) because I never know where your going in that regard and sometimes I never see it coming like with this chapter. And I have to say, this story is so great that even if there aren’t any sex it’s still a great read!

Glad I found you amongst the endless sea of authors on this site when you started out and I hope your imagination keeps fueling the fire of your passion for writing. I don’t comment often and I’m sorry about that

I liked this chapter...lots. Your creativity is spectacular!

This is an excellent story. But why do you keep saying "no babies"

Zel should have had his baby and kisa is not on the list for babies yet. But a caretaker centaur??? So awesome

If you are uncertain if you are any good writing, then know that you made this cynical older guy both laugh and cry with this chapter.

Just sayin'

You have a talent.

Cherish it and thanks for allowing us to enjoy it!

This is just fucking incredible. I’m a little disappointed that we won’t have Mole and Zel hooking up again, but I love the Tink/Kisa dynamic you have going on. You’re a fantastic writer and I’m looking forward to more

Really great story! Thanks for continuing your work with this one, it's probably my favorite series on this site ever!

The banter you showed between Tink and Kisa was absolutely hilarious!!!!

Green bugar with tits! 😂 Lol funny

Well done. Please return Dana to personhood.

Fun to read.

Thanks!

It was, oh so predictable that there was going to be a cat-girl.

Didn't say that I wasn't waiting for this scene though. Enjoyed it too! Not what I would have predicted it being like, but that is why I read other peoples stories. To see things from an entirely different perspective. One that I would never have conceived.

Well done. Another good one that leaves me eager for more.

I love your writing. The parts describing dancing are beautiful, even to somebody like me with no sense of rhythm. Name dropping Stephen King was both respectful and humorous.

I'm loving this.

THANKS

I wonder will mike gain immortality through his trysts and bonding with the monster girls. He seems to be getting stronger and it just made me think.

Since you introduced Kisa, I've enjoyed watching her grow. Then you showing her dance, Wow and thank you! Talk about bringing her to life.

I'm simply awestruck with this last installment and would absolutely LOVE to see Radley kittens running around and dancing with the fairies through the house sometime in the future!

I love the way you bring personality, quirks and humor into your writing! And have to admit although you over several of your stories have taken me from tears of pain all the way to laughing so hard I have actually fallen out of my chair once . . . but the coming together of Mike, Tink and Kisa just jumped to my favorite chapter of all time! And considering the high standards you set for me with "Last of her kind" I'm at a loss on how to share my literary worship. Thank you again writerannabelle

Katzkin

And if Kisa has trouble restraining herself in the presence of the rats, I fear Cerberus might not even try around Kisa...

I loved this chapter, may not have much to say other then please keep believing in yourself this is so amazing to read and the depth that you keep making is something I can't find any where else. I may have arrived late to the party but oh boy am I so happy I will follow you forever

I'm binging this tale as I recover from hip replacement surgery. I love to dance, so this chapter was beautiful and inspiring. I usually read about 14 books at a time, but I'm limiting my reading now to this story and savoring it. Cheers!

Hey so ive read it all to this point over the last few days and i want to say this is fucking awsome

You captured me at the beginning, and I am eternally grateful this isn’t a short story. Right now this story is what is helping me get through. It is my escape. It has often been so since I first found you on Literotica.

Having babies!!! What the F**k...5 stars

I haven't commented on any of your chapters to date since I'm still playing catch up and I'm so far behind. I have read the first books a few times but this time around started from the beginning and have made it to here over 6 weeks!

I am an avid reader but usually dislike stories with tons of characters. With yours however you manage to build beyond just another character for your main to hook up with. There are some beautiful relationships and difficult things being worked through. I appreciate your continually coming up with new things to surprise us with.

Again I feel weird commenting when I'm still so far behind, but this chapter was so brilliant and vividly pictured in my mind that I had to.

Keep being your amazing self!

Have been away for a year so you could get ahead of me and now I am back and loving it thanks

Jim

This series is two firsts for me; Non-human and chapters that span over FOUR years. I remember (I think) you saying at the end of Part 4, it would end in four more Parts. Although I joined the party late, I’ll truly be sad when Part 8 is over. What will I do next? This series has helped me deal with the loss of two daughters, a marriage and facing a life unlike anything I could have imagined. It’s a distraction which has helped me deal with the unimaginable. My journey is step-by-step and day-by-day. Thank you for a respite and needed diversion. Finn

Magnificent

No, no, no, we don’t want shorter; we LIKE longer stories, the longer, the better! We want character development and personal growth, problem solving and plot twists, heroic action and sinister conspiracies. You know, kind of like the chapters in Home for Horny Monsters.

Thank you so much for this fabulous journey of discovery you’ve given us. I’m grateful that each time I finish a chapter, there’s another one waiting for me. I started back at the very beginning as instructed and have grown to cherish all these sisters, and you keep giving us new ones to love. If only it could go on forever but though I try to slow my reading down, soon I’ll reach the current submission, meaning I’ll join the ranks of your other followers anxiously awaiting our next fix, HHM junkies desperate for more!

so bloody brilliant!

you simply have a way with words and draw the reader in so they cannot put it down....awesome

and please do not concern yourself with the negative criticism. Some people have really no idea what they want....for me, anyone who comments with anonymous is incredibly annoying and ought to not be allowed to. If they are not willing to sign up then shut up. There, that's my opinion.

So much for being shy....

There's just so much wrong with what anon said below me...

Please disregart idiots like that, this story is as close to perfection as i can imagine.

I'm not surprised. Face it Mike has or had sex with most of the females living with him. Don't know if what he has is a harem or not but he definitely gets a lot of pussy! (Pun intended! :))

My two cents, ignore anon who writes a long diatribe about what should be or not be yet obviously keeps reading. It's fantasy of an erotic nature! Brilliantly done in my humble opinion. Love how you sneak in little references and the humour is perfect, especially Tink, love her character.

Another great story and glad someone finally realized about pregnancy scares was wondering when

Another great chapter

Glad to see they are talking about children and pregnancy scare

Looking forward to more and more things each chapter

I just love this story, such intrigue at every corner.

Just so you know as I was reading the dance scene my wife I was nodding my head and tapping my foot like I was listening to music. The way you wrote that section I swear I could hear the music and see the dance. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Fem feline sexuality is so sexy! Slowly massage my hand down Kisa kitty’s back to watch her back arch up and end with her sexy butt in the air, slightly quivering and definitely inviting! I love your writing. I think I’m gonna practiced dancing bc after reading this chapter, I believe anyone can dance! And should!