by drrtymined
I see this as chapter five of "Alumnight" just with a different name. the first four chapters received 5 stars from me but this one here was as boring as a story can get, It didn't even seem like the same writer. I gave this one 2 stars in hopes we something with more spark next chapter. Thanks for sharing
Pappasleaze!
Okay, honest thoughts here. Very hot, it's great, though I think you could do to lengthen soke scenes a bit more. I believe that the 2nd chapter of Alumnight had the perfect balance, for me personally at least.