All Comments on 'Home Invasion'

I really injoyed this story and I hope you make more of it. Thank you so much.

Very boring, and I gave up half way through it.

More please.

You had me right up to the mommy-slut garbage. And then you double down with the aunt being a submissive? And then there’s more??? A decent storyline with likable characters just got flushed down the toilet by an author that piled ten pounds of crap in a a five pound bag.

Very much liked it. So much potential for a nice epic series. Please keep it going.

The build up is great, and it is well written, but like the other commentor said: the "mommy-slut" stuff was way over the top. Also, this doesn't belong in the NonConsent/Reluctance category, this is more close to Incest/Taboo. Like all parties were willing and it was planned out. And the intruders didn't even watch them do the deed; if they did, it could have added to the reluctance angle, but no. I was even waiting for the intruders to double cross him and fuck the mom and sister themselves, but hey that's not what happened.

Too long winded and overblown!

Awesom!

Words are hard to find to describe this tour-de-force. And mom's dialogue certainly a turn-on.

With a simple name like Henry who would have thought he was such a stud living the Ultimate Dream as a young stud with a Mother & Daughter and a twin to boot.. OMG what a Lucky Dog..

Mostly well written but a little long winded in several parts. Needs a sequel covering the seduction of the aunt, the half sisters and their mother.

I really enjoyed your writing, but I do agree with Jack506, there needs to be at least a part two!!!

An excellent story, one of the best of its type, in fact, one of the best, full stop. Thank you very much for an enthralling tale, well worth all five stars, more if they were available.