All Comments on 'Home Is Where the Heart Is Ch. 03'

Nice story and well written....the father/daughter interaction is strange but as long as it doesn't go full incest I'm fine. I also like the soft D approach so far but if it's heading toward hard D/Sadistic you'll probably lose me. He claimed he was going to show her his dark side but nothing in her character description says she is in this for pain but to serve.

cheers

Not being a Dr. Myself I didn’t know you could insert an IUD without breaking the hymen.

In fairness, you probably can't. Admittedly, I didn't think that one through, probably should have gone for an implant instead. Good catch.

Yeah not bad. The IUD implant did take her hymen though

Scores 4/5

I love this story so far, the softer D/s is really hot but I'm sure if it were rougher I'd enjoy that too. I hope there is more of this story to come or just more of your writing in general