All Comments on 'Home on Leave'

Good start, more chapters, please. The parents need to join and the siblings when old enough.

5/5, good start but you need to FTDS

If you are adding more chapters, great, because this has much potential. If this is a standalone, then it has flaws, not the least of which is, this is very much an incomplete story. No rating yet to see if you develop the story.

Dewey Cheatham

A family open about sex creates so many possibilities.

Hot! Part two please!

Good first story and great telling of the story very few if any errors at least I didn’t catch them. Keep going fun to read and short.

You sure as fuck were never military nor do you know much about women.

I need more!