by eidetic
You come across as a misogynist fascist, who makes up for a small dick by waving a gun. Your name isn't Trump, is it?
Five stars for a great yarn and worthy of a sequel if you're so inclined.
That was a pleasure to read. I wouldn't mind reading some more with these 3 characters.
Very well written. The overall picture you paint in my mind's eye is terrific and the sex is fucking hot, too! A followup chapter would be awesome!
Normally distain the big-tits&big-cock, tired and overworked crapola..
But you pushed it far enough over the top to pull it off!
I'm not sure how to do it, but I beg you for more! Please!!
I liked the mix of sex and personality. Another story or stories that addressed the non cave-like relationship and city interactions would be fun to read. On the other hand it was a nice weekend experience that does not need to build to anywhere. Well done.
Great story - love it - the pregnancy bit at the end tipped me over too - perfect - as I wanted it to happen before I got there...
Must hope this carries on !
You have a strange mind but I can imagine everything you write about so you’re doing well telling your story.
Damn, another good one. It’s so seldom when you can find someone here who can write plot as good, if not better, than the sex.