All Comments on 'Home Sweet Cave'

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SykerockerSykerockerover 1 year ago

Damn, another good one. It’s so seldom when you can find someone here who can write plot as good, if not better, than the sex.

Merlin_the_MagicianMerlin_the_Magicianalmost 2 years ago

You have a strange mind but I can imagine everything you write about so you’re doing well telling your story.

MrViixMrViixalmost 3 years ago

Excellent! Great dialog & hot sex!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Copied and saved to my faves file.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow

Another great story!!

AnyMooseAnyMoosealmost 4 years ago
More!

This is more than sequel-worthy; why have you made us wait?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow - amazing

Great story - love it - the pregnancy bit at the end tipped me over too - perfect - as I wanted it to happen before I got there...

Must hope this carries on !

winchesterfoxwinchesterfoxover 6 years ago
That was great!

I liked the mix of sex and personality. Another story or stories that addressed the non cave-like relationship and city interactions would be fun to read. On the other hand it was a nice weekend experience that does not need to build to anywhere. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Absolutely should be another chapter!

I'm not sure how to do it, but I beg you for more! Please!!

rayironyrayironyalmost 7 years ago
spectacular!

Normally distain the big-tits&big-cock, tired and overworked crapola..

But you pushed it far enough over the top to pull it off!

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 7 years ago

Very well written. The overall picture you paint in my mind's eye is terrific and the sex is fucking hot, too! A followup chapter would be awesome!

rightbankrightbankover 7 years ago
interesting

but a bit too over the top for me

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 7 years ago
Very nicely done.

That was a pleasure to read. I wouldn't mind reading some more with these 3 characters.

ballznall60ballznall60over 7 years ago
Great setting, very imaginative.

Five stars for a great yarn and worthy of a sequel if you're so inclined.

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 7 years ago
WTF?

The Trump comment...i loved the story!

looney67looney67over 7 years ago
very good

Great little storey

Would make a great star for a mini series

kafkafover 7 years ago
Trump

You come across as a misogynist fascist, who makes up for a small dick by waving a gun. Your name isn't Trump, is it?

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I'm sorry I finished and submitted the latest Spark story so close to the Geek Pride deadline that it was delayed and missed the 25th. However, it is now published. I hope those who have been enjoying the series continue to do so with this latest offering. *~*~*~*~* I keep fo...

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