All Comments on 'Homecoming Ch. 03'

by Semele93

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Anonymousabout 4 years ago

Brilliant addition!

What a relief this chapter was when I read this...

“If you injure yourself gravely by not safewording, you will be out of my house and my life so fast, your head will spin. Have I made myself clear, sub?"

I was beyond relieved! It’s obvious that her walking away really hurt him deeply, still really curious as to her reasoning for walking out on him because you’ve made it obvious that she loved him (hopefully still does).

I’m a mushy romantic at heart and really want this to work out, really looking forward to reading more. There was only one odd thing that jumped out in this chapter, you commented that he punched her in the pussy???? Surely not? I was hoping you meant slapped or spanked because a punch to a woman’s groin is going to hurt as much as it would a man if he was on the receiving end!

Really appreciate all the time and effort you’ve put into this.

Tess (UK)

Anonymousabout 4 years ago

Continue please

One of my favorites I am really hoping you continue. Please continue!!

Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Awesome

Please please please continue this is Amazing