All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 03 Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Another Great One

This is really hot. I like the off-hand references to Frank and Mom being the best for each other, both in Frank's thoughts and in the comments others make. I hope that Mom is the one he wants to breed with. This is a totally great series. AnHoa Rifleman

(Note: An Hoa (or AnHoa) is sometimes spelled as one word and sometimes as two, but both the A and the H are always upper case.)

jdnunyerjdnunyerover 12 years agoAuthor

Thanks as always for the feedback AnHoa Rifleman. I appreciate it. (And thanks for the clarification on your name.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
please find a new story or quit

Even you must know that 29 ch. with the same characters is boring and an abuse of the site. Your just taking up space now

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Forget the Critic

A story with 29 chapters is not a bad thing if it continueds to develop, continues to grow and expand, continues to leave the readers hungering for the next chapter because they know it will be full of new twists and fresh excitement. If a story with 300 chapters just keeps getting better with each new installment, then it is still way too short. Keep writing this extraordinary prose and ignore the naysayers. AnHoa Rifleman

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