All Comments on 'Homelands Pt. 05 Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Excellent Yet Again!!

JD: I don't know what the problem is with the rest of the world. This is an explosive, well written series. I hope you will continue it to the end. An Hoa Rifleman

jdnunyerjdnunyeralmost 12 years agoAuthor

I have every intention of doing so, Rifelman. :) It's enough for me to know that there are a few people out there, such as yourself, who enjoy reading my stories.

JD

LA213LA213almost 12 years ago
5 stars for all of your chapters =)

I have read all of them and it's getting more interesting every time. Btw, Hank is playing with her emotional feelings in my (POV) and is only using her for his benefit to get information. Anyways, i'll be waiting for the newer chapter's to come soon.

P.S. This might be Incest/Taboo but you still have a unique writing style , that will get you far in the future.

jdnunyerjdnunyeralmost 12 years agoAuthor

Thank you, LA. That's very flattering. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Your story is as good as I remember and I enjoy every bit of it. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
interesting....

hank....i don't trust him, feels like he's playing a long con.

as for the people in the prison world i feel bad for zoe, she was right and is the most powerful and still people gang up on her as though she's the bitch

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