All Comments on 'Honey Tom'

the dialect i could accept, that's the character's voice.

i didn't understand why the construction of the narrative had to be so awkward. it was like slogging through mud. a battle.

This was difficult to read. At least the young man accepted that he is bi and needs to be fucked on a regular basis. Absolutely nothing wrong with that although I think men that identify as bi are kidding themselves. They would be happier if they accepted that they are gay. Up to the time when I sucked my first cock,, I truthfully had never thought of m2m sex. But, as soon as I sucked that cock and tasted that sweet cum, I knew I was now a cock sucker. In fact, that night I sucked off 5 guys and ended the night by finding that I also loved being fucked..

I totally understood the gist of this story. I loved the newness of the telling. The different way the writer (you) used the backwoods vernacular to bring the reader into the tale. Being from a mountainous area and having grown up with folk who talked and thought like these characters did, helped me understand the verbiage. Thank you for a wonderful story's! Keep writing!

It was nice to see the difference in your writing style with this one. I know mountain folk, and their way of speaking isn't easy for everyone to follow. You did a excellent job.