All Comments on 'Honey Trap'

Short, hot story, and well-written. Thanks for sharing. A nice debut.

Well written - not too much hard core descriptive verse - liked the emotions and the story-line. Welcome change from the wham-bam styles.

great story but a little lacking in the behind the scenes section. just a little hard to figure out what exactly was going on until the end of the story keep writing

Two very different women, I liked that, & the clamps keeping Nic going.... I loved the setting too, might have been intertwined w sex more.