All Comments on 'Honeymoon Dee-Lite'

A promising start.

Nicely paced and well written erotica. I love the little twist at the end! What's good for the goose is good for the gander!

Ha! Great ending.

Good premise.

But the anal sex happened and continued too abruptly.

Needed much more in the way of teasing and touching her asshole befre he started to insert fingers.

Maybe even a scene -- before the butt plug was in place -- where she asked him to show her how he'd worship it to see if that'd be hot for her too.

And while he's teasing her asshole she could have been playing with his cock and balls.

Four stars.

A whole tube of lube? You wouldn't feel anything. Women get freaked out, you cant tell me they poo little tiny things, they can stretch

Great story! The dialogue between the two in the beginning sounds like me and my wife…NFW! We did it a few times many years ago but she says that part of her body is off limits.

Good premise.

Rushed sex.

Could have used more asshole teasing. And rimming. To get her really in the mood. Continuing until she begged for his cock in her ass.

Three stars.

Didn't like the last sentence.