by Prolonged_Debut10
So much detail! It bounces around a bit, break lines would be great for web postings... I'm really enjoying this novella, you really did great on this... On we go... :D
Please get a good proofreader and grammarian to make an otherwise excellent story much more readable. It will make me change a three or four star grade into a strong FIVE star!
Since Jemma is the wife of Patricia’s father, she is Patricia’s stepmother, not her mother-in-law.