All Comments on 'Hop Aboard the O Train'

Thinking of you during my morning commute always brings a smile to my lips. 💋

I spend lots of time on the train as one way is 90 minutes and oh what I could be doing the rides going to be very different 2 morrow only if u were on board

Good to hear from you again John! And this was delish as always .. xx

Good. If you'd ended it when she left the train at 10:50 it would have been excellent. After that, take it or leave it.

This was just lovely. The pacing of the first part on the train built up a nice anticipation with a sweet payoff that didn’t turn crude or predictable. And of course the second part is begging for a (happy) ending. Well... I’d be begging... Lovely.

Makes me want to take the train! Wonderful tale and masterfully told, as always. You’re the best!