All Comments on 'Hope, Charity & Faith Ch. 07'

What happened to Ricky was beyond foul and what's apparently going to happen to Jaleel is messed up too. If they're gonna do it they'd better either kill him or beat him bad enough so he has severe memory loss, cuz otherwise the whole lot of them or at least Jay and the underling bitches are going to prison. This whole series has been both dark and infuriating, this chapter especially cuz it reminded me of something terrible that happened to a friend of mine back in highschool.I couldn't help but empathise with Jaleel as a character, there's an indescribable inner rage that comes when something happens to someone ur close to and you weren't around to stop it or atleast help stop it.

Are the teacher's gonna step up and do something? Cuz up til now they've pretty much just been protecting the aggressors and letting the bullies be jerks.

I'm just going to have to ask you to have a little "Faith" in regards to this story and know that two more chapters are already in the pipe.

This story is ten chapters long- Another installment is coming tomorrow.

I understand trust me; this time I was writing something close to my own high school experience. When I was in school during my freshman year, there was a guy like Ricky Arias who the jocks almost accosted the first time we went into the locker room. He wasn't really androgynous, so much as just uncharacteristically chubby and pear shaped for a guy and had moobs. These sick fucks started questioning his gender and fucking with him while everyone watched. No one really did anything but stand around and snicker also visibly uncomfortable.

Fortunately he wasn't assaulted, but his parents cared enough to pull him out of that school.

Me; I wasn't so lucky because at the end of the year I was assaulted by the same guy and others, all gang members. I was hit directly down the middle of my head with one of those old school long necked coke bottles in broad daylight on the lawn of a house where people (Uninvolved) were just sitting there watching. Those criminals ran away and while I lay there writhing in pain, one of the people who lived there asked me to get off his lawn. No police called-nothing.

High School in these urban centers needed and still do need reform at the highest level. Teachers I encountered actually did behave in this manner taking an unintentional "survival of the fittest"attitude. In my junior year, the vice principal told me he would look the other way if I retaliated against my bullies. By that time I had "the look"- PTSD Rambo First Blood expression. No one bothered me that serious anymore. I graduated and I've never looked back.

Trust the story-and I apologize if it upset you greatly.

Sometimes I find it hard putting sex scenes in these tales; but once I find an organic way of inserting them, I go for broke.

BTW, a third of bullies I encountered during my school years were in fact, women with serious issues. It is something I've always wanted to explore.

Trust the story-It is not NTR (Netorare)

What did Jaleel do to the "FATES" to deserve this level of fuckery...

As always, you are the best on this platform especially in the thick genre. I also love how your stories are true stories and not just some wack filler for sex scenes.

I am curious because you mentioned that most of the bullies you encountered were women. I am Nigerian and grew up in Lagos. It is difficult to imagine a girl bullying the average guy. I'm not saying it didn't happen, but it was that rare. (or maybe I just had a privileged sheltered life).

I always watched high-school movies growing up and wondered how a bunch of girls would bully a guy and nothing would happen. And these were suburban high schools without the gang members. Just a bunch of snooty cheerleaders and wack jocks.

Looking forward to the other chapters. Keep it up.

Wait, if it's just 10 chapters, isn't that just 3 chapters of payoff for 7 chapters of this? Kinda feels uneven.