All Comments on 'Hopes, Like Flowers, Die'

by MaximillianJr

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EncntctEncntct7 months ago

It was good, but I’m not sure why Nate would have trusted the guy he bullied and looked at with horror a short time earlier. Fleshed out a little more this story would make more sense to me. Still, great writing as usual!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

He needs to make nate his slave.

sealandssdsealandssd7 months ago

I think Nate is still manipulating Axel.

wirtydordwirtydord7 months ago

I'm always excited to see a new story from you!

CaptainFortuneCaptainFortune5 months ago

I read everything this author writes. I wish they knew how dialogue tags worked as it always jolts me out of the story, but it doesn't matter too much bc their stories are always FIRE! like they are personally written for me. Love them. We need a sequel to Blood of My Enemy some day. This one was GREAT too!

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