All Comments on 'Hoplites, Thralls & Prizes Ch. 03'

by Odeon1776

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masterhobbesmasterhobbesabout 7 years ago
A bit dark

But good. Interested to see where it goes from here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

please keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Non-consent

This story has Non-consent written all over it. Hope I'm wrong, but gladiators and prizes? Will continue to read to see if I'm wrong.

magikman233magikman233about 7 years ago
not bad but..

the chapters are too short,you're getting into the story well enough though that it doesn't tae away from it in the least,also there are a few spelling errors,but again,nothing that takes away from the overall story.

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