by Combathampster
Meh not great. Your writing is great don't get me wrong just too short and he didn't even fuck her.
Great job, the build up was great. This is coming from a woman, very hot and sexy. Got me turned on and wanting.
I enjoyed reading that. Maybe l will let my step-dad fuck me lol
Lots of stories here which are much better than this effort. It's full of errors and needs to be proof-read by someone competent in English.
For example, what does this -
"just double your hand of your belly."
mean?