by FilthyFantasy
12 inch length and 10inch across made it just sound like it was written by a teenager.
It will be interesting to see him turn the tables on these girls. Don't worry about the critics, but do take critique.... Your writing will only get better as you go. I've seen all my favorite authors grow as writers. A good story, and it should appeal to a good segment of your readers.
Oh yea, 12" x 10" sized cock, why not make 12ft x10ft, that's more believable, who writes this crap, sorry kid, zero stars. Word of advice most cocks are about 1-11/4"" dia a few and I mean a few are 2" or so. If you make it more believable your get more readers.
Great story, as always! I loved women taking control. Can't wait to read more!! Thanks for this!
PS Please ignore the baboons. Not sure how they managed to operate a computer...
Please don't discontinue this series I can't wait for the next chapter, this was so hot and probably one of my favorite stories on this site
I enjoyed it immensely.
Dont worry too much about the trolls.
They will always find something wrong.
Whether it be one single misspelled word or the fact that this work of fiction does not match reality
Not usually my type. Found it by accident. Looking forward for the next chapters. 5 stars
Amazing story. Can't wait for more. I hope they don't get too brutal with him, though.
I'd like to see them use him for a while until they think they have him tamed, only to then have him go to the cops.
I don't think that its within Rich's character to just tell the girl that he hates and is currently raping him that its okay to do so when she just complained about not getting a turn to rape him.
The only way I could see him doing so is if he thought they were pressuring her to join them and that she was really nice on her own, which she probably isn't given that she helped abduct and rape him.
If I was him I'd have started either responding in kind to the girls groping, or verbal warnings followed with physical action, maybe have a hidden camera on me