All Comments on 'Hostess at Ladies Night Pt. 04'

Another great installment in this story. I'm loving it. Thanks.

CFNF is one of my favorite fetish, so this is right up my alley. Thank you.

Again a good chapter of your story. When you wrote in the comments, that things will turn dark for Samantha I was sure that you will bring the gang back :) But it`s still a surprise for me what happened to the sadistic housewives...maybe they will be back in future parts. Anyway...for me personally there could be more licking or serving in general but please: write whatever makes you happy. It is really well done and I enjoy it a lot.

Wow, this story pushes so many buttons, especially how Samantha/crystal keeps finding ways to get herself deeper into the web of depravity. Can't wait to see where this is is heading.

What a great story, really looking forward to the next part

This has to be my favorite series on this site. Amazing.

I HOPE you write a way for her to escape them and go to college or leave the area or even get the debt paid off.

I need more!

Best story on the whole site! But please don't do a "happy" ending. :-)

It’s been quite a time since the last part, waiting to see what happens next

So sorry to keep you guys waiting, I've just been feeling really tired lately. I love your encouraging comments so much though, and despite the struggle, I'm already half way writing part 5! And no, there is no happy ending in sight... ;)

Glad to hear you haven't given up on this, I'm sure it will be worth the wait.

So it appears after writing and having it reviewed (thanks msplasher!) that part 5 was rejected because of the strong(er) non-con element, where the protagonist does not get excitement out of the situation. I can't really fix that, so I've decided to publish the other parts elsewhere. It's probably not allowed to link to it from here, but using Google might help. Tough luck, but I respect the rules (I'm just not willing to adjust the story flow).

Is part 5 published somewhere already? google doesnt help atm.

If you send me a direct, private comment I'll reply to you.

Thanks Samantha, after a bit of nifty work I was able to find the story elsewhere and was surprised it was rejected, I've certainly seen stories which I would consider stronger here. That said glad you were able to maintain the quality of the story and I hope part 6 doesn't take as long as the current one to produce.

Im gonna try to check for part5 but its tough to find.. i realllly love you're stories i hope u write more about black femdom. U can really feel the character/stories wow... really well written. I'd love to see princess doing more licking and humiliation thing but still without that.. i still loved it A LOT 5 star

OMG

PLZ NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!

THIS NOVEL IS SO AMAZING

PLZ NEXT PART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG

PLZ NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!

THIS NOVEL IS SO AMAZING

PLZ NEXT PART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HOW CAN I FIND PART5?

I CAN'T FIND IT EVEN SEARCH ON GOOGLE

PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU ARE A GOD WRITER

i found it!!!!!!!

plz write part 8!!!!!!!!

This is still the best story on the site imho. Are there possibly new parts coming after 7?

Thanks all! And yes, there will be new parts. The process is just very slow, but I have started on part 8.

Luv it!

I found #8 on Nifty. Please Please continue

Love this story!!! Also the character of Alyssa was an amazing tease. Hope to see her get a chance with Princess.