All Comments on 'Hostile Take Over of Sky'

No introduction of SKY. No introduction of Miley. Dozens of "lead-in sentences" making it very hard to read. Too much heated interaction between brother and sister with no explanation as to what lead up to this hostility. Maybe this was a "continuation" from previous submissions but if so it needs to be indicated so we would start at the earlier chapters, as is......

Just plain old BAD WRITING