All Comments on 'Hostile Witness Ch. 02'

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MICHAELG1963MICHAELG1963over 1 year ago

A great 2nd chapter for this story. Cannot wait to see how it continues

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Since she was not killed outright I assume the point is to humiliate? In which case why not include some physical "punishments" that would make it impossible for her to resume a career as a police officer. Ranging from lip filler and/or tongue piercing that make it hard for her to talk through to explicit and visible tattoos in violation of lapd policy and then impracticably large implants. Just a thought. Lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Do more please

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Loving getting the ideas in my head out for you to enjoy. If you have a suggestion add it in a comment, I have incorporated reader suggestions in previous stories.

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