All Comments on 'Hot and Sweet Ch. 20'

Keep writing! Thanks!

great writing but is it all?

Your writing style is very effective and the subject matter of your stories is super erotic. I'd love to read more of your material. What about the 24 hour servitude Jim owes to Jana's mom? How about the pool party for the woman starting a new career as a porn star (I've forgotten her name)? You've got me hooked and I want to know how those threads continue.

Hot and Sweet is an outstanding romantic drama, with a carefully paced plot and excellent characters. The love scenes perfectly balance the plot, and indeed are integral to it. Five stars.