All Comments on 'Hot Babe Romi'

this was shit it lacked background & reality so please do not continue

....she causes her partner to lose his job for making him late too often, then goes to get it back by stripping and blowing (and filming) the asshole manager? No. Damn. Way. The partnership is dissolved, because one partner is a slut with no respect for the requirements of adult life.

Your writing is very rough and suggesting that English is not your first language. If you want to contribute again, please get editorial help. You'll fail horrifically, if you don't.

I rated 3*, just to say that this story ending here will be a short and funny one...I tried not to read the: "to be continued..."...Reading that I would have to rate it 1*...Her attitude in the office was like a nonsense movie's action...going further will destroy the story...and this marriage...

Don't continue. This was bad enough. Check the score and just stop.

Even for fiction. This was just awful.

FUCKING HELL, NO! DON'T WRITE ANYTHING MORE! EVER!!! This was so fucking stupid you have to be as dumb as a rock to only think of it! 1/5

Don't embarrass yourself further.

This was juvenile.