All Comments on 'Hot Bebe'

Is obnoxious and pedantic, and no way would she be perceived as positively as she is by everyone in your story. She comes off as a spoiled know-it-all. I read it all the way to the end to see if it would get any better, but it didn’t. Mary Sue herself would take one look at this story and want to poke her eye out with a fork.

Oh the wearisome Troll anonymous again (Yawn). Please go back to your hole and read Primers. Bebe was meant, more or less, to project as a spoilt know-all. Please stop reading anything by EgmontGrigor. There's well over 1000 of them on this site.