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jneric2691 over 5 years ago

Loved the story!

Keep them coming!

Anonymousover 5 years ago

Which Is It?

First person? Second? Third? You can't just randomly go from "I" to "him"/"he"!!!

Atrocious dialogue, too.

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I've worked a string of jobs. From cab driver to construction worker, to glamour photographer to truck driver. I drive a big truck in New York. I'm also a trainer, having trained over 120 guys to drive tractor trailers.I also write erotic stories and poems.

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