All Comments on 'Hot Fuck'

go to bed. It's past your bedtime.

This is pathetic

I don't have the time to tell you all that was wrong with this story.

The writing was atrocious,so bad,that even though it's a short story,I stopped reading before it was halfway over just to get to the comment section.

If I thought that you had made any effort to write a decent story I might attempt to help.

This is obviously not the case.

Please never write again.

what you get out of another man fucking your woman? why you married her to be someone else whore?how can a man respect his spouse or trust her if she whoring for every tom,dick and harry.there snuff out there to kill unprotected sex.hubby self esteem of himself low.

Badly written, bad spelling - just bad!

...and it was you!!! You managed to write the VERY worst story ever submitted to Literotica. Congratulations, dunderhead.

I wanted my wife to fuck another man. He shoved his cock in her cunt and came in her, I was happy. Beginning and end of story. Please don't try anymore.

I sincerely feel for your wife, if you are married!! OR, is this a TRUE CONFESSION on your part?

While still being a terrible story, it is not nearly as as bad as some of the crap that "the clique" writes and gets critical acclaim.

I envy you....having a wife like that. Did they make a baby as well? Very erotic!

The part of the story that I related to was getting horny knowing a friend has fucked your wife. I met my wife when she was dating my friend. He fucked her about 80 times taking her from a near virgin to a fantastic fuck.I have seen him naked so know even though we are both about 6 inches hard he is much thicker. I know that he would have filled her more. I get horny thinking of her riding his cock with her small pussy lips grasping his thick shaft. I get really turned on when I see him look at her and I sense he is remembering the wild ride she was.

Another UK not even out of the first turn with a precious wimp tale! Why am I not surprised.

I feel sad for you writer. Little talent and no self respect.

Read some more and practice practice practice - writing and watching. Then discuss it at the pub to learn the ropes from the old on their 10th wife wimpsters.

is this worth the time to vote. yes just to vote as low as possible maybe to get some poor slob to never even open this drivel

Well, here's another one.

Only ending I can think of is, went home after the sex took my pistol put it in my mouth and killed myself so she and Barry could be happy. Tis the only logical followup to a very mentally ill person finding his wife in bed with another man. Why mentally ill you say, well no sane man would have just stood there with no prior warning and just joined in with no negative reaction to actions of his wife and his friend.

This was the worst piece of trash that I have read on this site. What MAN would want to see his wife screwing his best friend and then take sloppy seconds and thirds. I think the author is just about 4 bricks short of a load. I do hope you ARE NOT going to follow this up with another piece of trash unless you really like what people have to tell you.

I cannot believe this story , also I cannot believe the sick bastards who write in saying they want someone else to fuck their wives, excuse me while I puke.

Second - take some pictures on your camera phone and LEAVE! Your so-called friend is fucking your wife. And you think that it's okay? Grow a spine, divorce the cheating slut and either buy your ex-friend out of the restaurant or sell him your share and move on. RIDICULOUS STORY.

One of the worst share the whore wife with a.friend stories I've ever read.