by JavaBlack
Enjoyed this one a lot. Do consider a sequel or two entailing the women who rebuffed this couple. Second bite of the apple is just as sweet
I have no plans at this time to continue this story, but I give blanket permission to anyone inspired to do so. While I would HOPE that any such stories don't involve the disruption of Allison, Wallace and Louisa's happy lives, that is obviously up to the discretion of the author.
But this was quite erotic. The writing was good and I would like to see a sequel. Maybe with more Wallace? I’d like to hear his thoughts more. Thank you
Anonymous, I'll stand by my decision to skip it. Hot husband is probably as silly as hot wife and just as nasty. Besides, Dunkirk's scintillating comments tell the story completely.
@26thNC. Why you be like this? You gonna skip a story and make two disrespectful comments on it? Read the damn story, dude, or don't comment. Reaching for something off the dick shelf, there.
Entertaining story, Mr. Black. Are we related? You, Matthew, Randi, prolly triplets.
I like how they both shut down Linda, in her attempt at creating a D/s relationship. I also liked how tentative they were in turning this tale into a poly-tale.
All in all 3/5
Thank you for sharing this story. It is well written and you are a great story teller. Please keep writers sharing your work.
Sure, Allison has a voyeurism kink, but nothing wrong with a consensual three way.
None of the abuse or humiliation that turns cuck tales into a variant of BDSM.
Well written and even kinda believable in a "Sure, the super hunky guy finds himself with two hot bi women. What are the odds?" kind of way. Pretty sure there'd be plenty of men lining up to try this out.
Good story, thanks. Please keep writing.
You mean someone here had to testicular fortitude to write a "Hot husband" story here? On this site? Jesus tap dancin' Christ I'm surprised the cucky boy brigade haven't got woke and protested this writing.
Poor Wallace: Jesus Christ on a crutch, baby! This is all so confusing. Why can't we go back to the old simple game? I fuck. You watch. LOL
Poor Wallace: ''For crying out loud, baby! This is all so confusing. Why can't we go back to the old simple game? I fuck. You watch.
As long as we're supposed to think it's believable, why not add in the sequel that they discovered a 20-meter cube of 18-carat Swiss bullion under their house on the same day they were to be knighted by the Queen, but had to forego it to run off with Luke and save the Federation.