All Comments on 'Hot Moms Holiday Pt. 01'

that's it !

Really? You couldn't even give us a full sex scene? As usual it's well written and fantastical. But I'm not happy.

Loved it! Hopefully the next chapter will be out shortly so we can find out what she's shocked about. Five stars and a favorite point!

That's it!? You stop THERE? Please, tell me, what was your motivation in posting this?

I'd get it if you were a first-time writer who wanted to test the waters, gauge the reactions to see if continuing to write is worth the effort. But from someone who already postes twenty-six stories, getting something that's barely longer than a single page, and then stops dead right when it gets interesting, is just a let-down. Plain and simple.

2/5 for good writing that sadly misses anything interesting.

Great start looking forward to more

More please.

Reminds me of Slut Moms Model which I liked. More slow burn than some of yours. 5 stars for good description of buildup.

Nothing worse than a tease.....

Grandma needs his cock filling her pussy

Please do continue, more nasty dialogue form grandma and hope for some impregnation at end with mom so she can start her new life!

well put together nice story line ' of corse it needs another 2 chapters . regards pete

Great start. Please keep going.

imma look over my glasses at Fleuro. great start though. a bunch more chapters on the way?

I can't wait to read the next chapter very sexy and erotic please carry on

You’re off to a great start.

Wow. Double wow. You're off to a fantastic start with a brilliant story that holds so many possible and mind boggling developments. I can't wait for the next installment. Please keep up your good work.

Exceptional - what a neat story! 5 Stars.

This has so much promise, can't wait for the next part. 5*.

Way too short! You're a bitch, just a tease!