All Comments on 'Hot Naughty Aunt Pam Pt. 02'

by Tommyx89x

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

too short

SomethingInTheWaySheMoves over 4 years ago

I wish I could bleach my eyes to get rid of any lingering presence of this story.

I don't know what excuse you're going to use. Might be the "not a native speaker" excuse. Might be a bit "mentally challenged". I'm going to go with "underage and never bothered to learn Proper English, with well-defined rules of spelling and grammar." (And no, you do not become educated through osmosis.)

Tommyx89x over 4 years agoAuthor

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What's wrong with the way I worded what happened? What Grammer mistakes? Verbiage? Tenses?

Too short... There is more to come

Tommyx89x over 4 years agoAuthor

There is much more to tell

bigdicktexan over 4 years ago

I'm waiting to see whats next.

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