All Comments on 'Hot Property'

Excellent story. 5-stars.

Thanks Dan - that's really kind of you :-) I've published a total of 16 short stories so far (8 age gap and 8 cops)...going to start writing another one today! x

Hot Property has many fine qualities as a story. First, its pacing is excellent, the plot steady but not rushed. Second, the characters are well defined and really come alive to the reader. Third, the love scene is beautifully written, and has a wonderful romantic mood, even if the love scene is rather too short. The result is a Five Stars story, a rating fully deserved by this author. Readers would richly rewarded if this author were to publish more stories on the site soon.

Thanks very much anonymous. I have been busy publishing for sale on various outlets, but I will endeavour to put another short story onto this site soon x