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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Spelling/Grammar

I thought Canadians were particularly careful with grammar. Your story is about a "girls' weekend," not just a single girl with a weekend, which would be spelled, "girl's weekend."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Fun story

Brad is a lucky guy. It is great being in the right place at the right time

CanadianMCanadianMalmost 8 years agoAuthor

Sorry for the error in grammar, methinks the spell check got me and I did not catch it when I reviewed it. Too late now as I have no idea how to change it once posted.

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