All Comments on 'Hot Summer Night Continues'

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FunkyPeople99FunkyPeople99about 12 years ago
Great story

Very sexy hope to see a lot more

route137route137about 12 years ago
Thank you.

Adrian is one lucky young man!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
initialisms/text jargon are bad in literature

using "OMG" in writing stories is very inane. Unless the character is literally saying the letter "O," "M," and "G," than it makes no sense to say that in a story--unless it's done ironically which it doesn't seem to be here

velcro_zippervelcro_zipperalmost 6 years ago
Exceptionally sexy!

Ellen is a perfectly naughty mature hottie, and I would love to read more about her erotic adventures!!

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