All Comments on 'Hot Summer Swing'

,,Good writing, now write stories about the couples jobs as the poolside erotic F*** masseuses & waiters for the Jamaican obese swingers cruise.. the girl's are popular and average 20 half hour "sessions" per day..they Love mounting the hugely hung Jamaican basketball players horse-size cocks .. what fun ..Beth is probably on fuckedhard18.com and Carrie on massagegirls18.com ..or check massage-parlor.com

A couple of suggestions that should get you better ratings and reviews:

have your main character be the alpha male

avoid sloppy seconds

Jim was to fixated on Chuck's cuck

Nothing new, particularly interesting or special about this one.

Well enough written, no glaring errors but also nothing to make it stand out from the crowd as especially hot.

LOVED this sexy, hot story. My biggest fantasy is to share my hot bride and watch her cum & cum while I fuck his wife. Mmmmmmm .. Thanks much!! ..Tim